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Burdens  by A. Meril 9 Review(s)
SurgicalSteelReviewed Chapter: 7 on 3/20/2007
These are all beautifully done.

Author Reply: :) Glad you like them.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 7 on 3/19/2007
A wonderful collection.

Author Reply: Thank you. :)

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 6 on 3/19/2007
Feanor carried himself the greatest burden of guilt, having been caught, in his own unique manner, in Melkor's own defiance of his brethren; and what it cost those who followed him!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 5 on 3/19/2007
Each of these burdens is small in and of itself, but speaks of the horrors of the horrible fratricide and lost ones, sundered by choice or death--or both.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/19/2007
There is hope in this heart, at least.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/19/2007
Yes, he would want to keep his children with him, particularly in that case.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/19/2007
A moment of great grief and guilt there.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/19/2007
Oh, how we don't wish to share that weight with one another, although we do carry it.

MithLuinReviewed Chapter: 7 on 3/19/2007
Nicely done - I like how you picked the unknown followers, not the leaders, to focus on.

Author Reply: Thanks! I always wonder what it was like for the little people, the ones who are never named in the books.

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