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Visions  by Calenlass 4 Review(s)
Beruthiels CatReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/8/2007
Interesting twist...It makes you think Elros could have died with doubt in his mind. Love his admonition at the end!

BC

Author Reply: It was a good thing he didn't have any doubts. This is when foresight comes in handy! :)

~Calenlass

NessaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/8/2007
Excellent. Keep them coming....you have poetry in your soul...

Nessa

Author Reply:
Poetry in my soul...
I like the sound of that. :)
Thank for the comment!

~Calenlass

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/7/2007
That's wonderful. Who's to say Elros wasn't as foresighted as his brother? I'm glad he can see far enough ahead to know that some of his line will stay true.

Author Reply: I couldn't agree more.

~Calenlass

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/7/2007
Alas that such as Elros should foresee such things!

Adunaic doesn't have much of a vocabulary provided for us to peruse, does it?

Author Reply: I think I would've died at that moment, seeing what will come to pass.
And no, it doesn't. *frowns* I managed to find a dictionary, but it's also very limited.
At least I was able to find "Elendili" and "Endurance." :)

Thanks, Larner, for commenting on everything I posted. I appreciated them!

~Cal

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