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Corruption  by Calenlass 4 Review(s)
AntaneReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/21/2007
Sorry for that blank review - pressed the wrong button! But this is a marvelous follow up to Obsession - another warning for us all. Hantanyel!

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Author Reply: I have one more poem planned after this one, titled "Addiction."
Thank you for your words. :)

~Calenlass

AntaneReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/21/2007

Beruthiels CatReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/20/2007
Hi Cal!

Great job on both of these! I'd love to see you take this into a trilogy including acceptance (of the ring) and betrayal by it? Hope I'm making sense here!

BC

Author Reply: I'm writing on "Addiction" next. It will be the last, since I also had a trilogy in mind after finishing "Obsession". :)
It seems as if everything ends in a trilogy these days...lol

~Calenlass

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/19/2007
A striking warning. And remember, many of these references are also from the book, if slightly altered for the purposes of dramatic representation.

Excellent summary of the interactions one must expect with that Ring.

Author Reply: True. I guess I used movie quotes since they were the ones that first came into my mind, otherwise, I probably would've used book quotes, too.
Thank you for the review.

~Calenlass

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