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A Shot in the Dark  by Iawen Londea 23 Review(s)
SilvertreeReviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/20/2005
Great Job Londea!Can you suggest any topics for my first story? Spread the word will you? Thanks!Any help will be greatly appreciated

pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 11 on 7/5/2005
Loved this! A great story of the twins love for one another. Elledan was able to forgive them after all...
Love to hear you write another story on the twins...
You did great.....

Radioactive BubblegumReviewed Chapter: 11 on 3/6/2004
Wow! Great story! I really loved it! I hope to see the prequels soon!

Rad O.o

EstelleReviewed Chapter: 11 on 2/6/2004
Yes precious!!! You've left it so long that I've forgotten all about it :P But that was a sweet ending :D And Elrohir pulling that prank on Elladan... hee hee hee. Bad bad Elrohir :P

Author Reply: LOL. You're the only one to say anything about Elrohir's prank, everyone else was enthralled with Elladan's revenge prank, lol, but I rather thought Elrohir's was much worse. =D I'm glad you liked the end.

P.S. You are still more evil than me.

xsilicaxReviewed Chapter: 11 on 1/10/2004
Hmmm, was I reading this fic? I forget...

Well that was just a nice satisfying ending. It's good to know that arrows, bad words and pranks won't get in the way of brotherly love...even if the pranks get a little out of hand.

Elladan seems to have the art of fussing while not being overbearing about it...a very useful skill in this ill-begotten family.

So...when do we get the prequels?

Cathy,
xx
(Finally! Caught up to it *g*)

Author Reply: Wow I thought I replied to this review. LOL!!! Thank you so much for beta'ing this fic for me, you were an wonderful help to me. *many huggles* I'm glad that you liked the final chapter. The prequels... aren't coming for a while, but they are coming lol.

Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/12/2003
Just like the rest, this was wonderful. You have me looking forward to the prequels now! The line in the last chapter that summed it up for me was:

“Elves are not supposed to die,” Elrohir said softly.

I think that is why this story was so mesmerizing for me. It is very difficult to think of an immortal feeling the grief and pain of death. I also like the fact that even though he tried to kill them, they felt the loss of their former friend. Now how bout those prequels?

Author Reply: LOL, it will be a time before the prequels come, sorry. And thank you, I am glad you liked my story and that you liked how I handled Elladan and Elrohir's feelings about Celedur's death, even though he did try to kill them both lol. I didn't want them to just be like "Yeah, it's over." They were once really close to him. LOL.

SivanReviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/11/2003
Funny chapter. LOL.

I can't wait to read the prequel.

I love what I read.

Author Reply: Thank you!! I had a hard time with the pranks and such, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

EstelleReviewed Chapter: 10 on 11/29/2003
*Ahem*

I've been waiting and waiting and waiting for months for you to finish chapter 11. Where is it? Huh??

*pokes you*

Give me chapter 11!

*pokes you again*

NOW!! :P

*pokes you with evil mithril box* *eg*

Author Reply: The final chapter is sitting in Cathy's mailbox, where it has been for over a week. So I'm just waiting for her to send it back. Go bug her about it. LOL.

Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 10 on 10/21/2003
You must finish this soon! I must know how it turns out. LOL You have got me hooked.

Author Reply: TY TY. Unfortunately chapter eleven isn't coming along so well. Well maybe if you put up more of yours soon I will feel inspired. LMAO.

Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/21/2003
Still enjoying this very much. I hope you plan to write more stories in the future. Also, you made me think about how it would feel for Elrond to know that he would out live Aragorn. It was a very sad and touching moment when Elrond was thinking about that event.

Author Reply: Wow, thanks for saying so! That scene was more meant to be about how Elrond is NOT supposed to outlive Elrohir, because Elrohir isn't supposed to die. I'm glad you took another meaning to it though because that makes me feel good about my writing, lol. *pokes you about updating your fic* LOL!

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