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| The Rider - Finding Trouble by Jay of Lasgalen | 10 Review(s) |
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| Fiondil | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/21/2007 |
| A most interesting story. I liked the way it was a group effort yet seamlessly written. There was more than enough heart-stopping moments for even the most angst-ridden soul and the ride of the elves to the rescue, especially Glorfindel appearing to back up Elrohir, was very satisfying. Well done. Author Reply: Thanks. I enjoyed the challenge, and I think the different parts fit together very well - the other writers have done a brilliant job. I'm glad you liked Glorfindel's sudden appearance - it certainly surprised Elrohir! | |
| mistry89 | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/21/2007 |
| Thank you! Very exciting (I confess, I'm always pleased to see Tales Of The Elflings Cheers :) Author Reply: Thanks - as you know, I love the twins at any age :>) I love their interaction with Glorfindel too! | |
| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/20/2007 |
| What an exciting adventure--and very well-done and coherent for a group story! Author Reply: It was an interesting challenge - and fascinating to get the nearly-completed story back and see where other writers had taken *my* story. All the parts seem to fit together very well. | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/19/2007 |
| A wonderful conclusion to a rousing yarn. Well-written battle scenes; and the reunion of the brothers and their father makes for good reading. Author Reply: Thanks, Raksha! It felt strange to set up the opening scenes and then leave it to someone else - I kept wondering how Elladan was doing :>) | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/19/2007 |
| Elrohir's compassion and decency will lead him to his missing brother after all - I like that. Good chapter; I see that Elladan is still a warrior even without his memory. | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/19/2007 |
| The cavalry is on the way to the rescue, but Elladan is on his own - how frustrating for all concerned. It's a wild ride, alright. | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/19/2007 |
| You can't keep one Peredhel out of trouble when his twin is in it! The plot thickens and the game is afoot! Onto the next chapter! | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/19/2007 |
| Oh dear; Elladan's situation is getting worse! I feel like I'm watching an old-fashioned cliffhanger serial; and am enjoying it immensely. | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/19/2007 |
| Uh-oh; the twins are in a jam! Lay in the bandages and milk & cookies at Imladris! Seriously, lots of tension and excitement here, the story grabs my interest. | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 10/19/2007 |
| A fine chapter; Elrond's discovery of the new dead heaped with the old in the burrow was chilling and grievous. I loved the otters; and the leader-otter's viewpoint of the fallen Peredhel. Wonderful descriptions, too. | |