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The Rider - Finding Trouble  by Jay of Lasgalen 4 Review(s)
FiondilReviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/21/2007
A most interesting story. I liked the way it was a group effort yet seamlessly written. There was more than enough heart-stopping moments for even the most angst-ridden soul and the ride of the elves to the rescue, especially Glorfindel appearing to back up Elrohir, was very satisfying. Well done.

Author Reply: Thanks. I enjoyed the challenge, and I think the different parts fit together very well - the other writers have done a brilliant job. I'm glad you liked Glorfindel's sudden appearance - it certainly surprised Elrohir!

mistry89Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/21/2007
Thank you!
Very exciting (I confess, I'm always pleased to see Tales Of The Elflings - if only in Glorfindel's eyes)

Cheers :)

Author Reply: Thanks - as you know, I love the twins at any age :>) I love their interaction with Glorfindel too!

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/20/2007
What an exciting adventure--and very well-done and coherent for a group story!

Author Reply: It was an interesting challenge - and fascinating to get the nearly-completed story back and see where other writers had taken *my* story. All the parts seem to fit together very well.

Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/19/2007
A wonderful conclusion to a rousing yarn. Well-written battle scenes; and the reunion of the brothers and their father makes for good reading.

Author Reply: Thanks, Raksha! It felt strange to set up the opening scenes and then leave it to someone else - I kept wondering how Elladan was doing :>)

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