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| The Spirit of Gondor by Linda Hoyland | 15 Review(s) |
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| JastaElf | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/14/2007 |
| What a wonderful story!! I love all the characterizations, but especially two grown men who are able to see to the needs of a little girl who believes she has seen a ghost! You built it all up perfectly; I knew they'd do something, but not this absolutely perfect ending! :) Thank you so much for sharing such a great tale! Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review and welcome to my stories!I'm delighted you enjoyed the story and the way I portrayed the characters. Your kind comments made my day! | |
| harrowcat | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/9/2007 |
| A fine ending Linda. Everyone's blushes spared and a lovely evening spent with loved ones.. Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm pleased you enjoyed the story. | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/9/2007 |
| All's well that ends well; with a very satisfying conclusion to this fine Halloween story. Aragorn and Faramir thought up a wonderful way to liven up the festivities and exonerate Elbeth without damaging Faramir's own reputation. Eowyn is well-written as a compassionate and fair woman who obviously cares deeply for her niece. Well-done and very atmospheric. Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm pleased you enjoyed this and hope it contained the elements you like. | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/9/2007 |
| I love the relationship between Elbeth and Aragorn; they are very comfortable together, though she reveres him as a great king as well as loving him like an uncle. Nice bit with Faramir helping Aragorn with the ceremonial preparations. Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I enjoy writing scenes for Elbeth and Aragorn. I'm pleased you liked the scene for Faramir and Aragorn.I wanted to show just how comfortable they are together,like father and son. | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/9/2007 |
| Well, Faramir's in a pickle and poor Elbeth is in the doghouse! The plot is thickening and no one is happy. I hated having to stand still for the dressmaker too when I was a kid; but gowns and most clothes don't fit themselves... Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I remembered my own childhood when writing about Elbeth and the pins. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/9/2007 |
| So, that's how Aragorn solved it, then? Nice resolution. And hopefully Elbeth's fears have been eased. Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm pleased you liked the resloution.I think Elbeth was more indignant than scared,but she is an unusual child! | |
| eiluj | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/8/2007 |
| I very much enjoyed this story. P.S. Some malign spirit -- playing tricks on you -- has centered the second chapter! Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm delighted you enjoyed the story. Also thank you for telling me about chapter 2.I hope I've fixed it now. | |
| Armariel | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/5/2007 |
| Oh this is delightful....I like the ghost story and little Elbeth and the image of Faramir wearing only towels is likely to haunt my dreams....(IhopeIhopeIhope;););)....... Looking forward to the next part.................... ~~~~{~@ Author Reply: Many thanks for your much apprecated review. I'm pleased you are enjoying the story. I wish you sweet dreams tonight! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/4/2007 |
| Okay. So, how are they going to handle this now? Heh! Author Reply: The complicated tangle will soon be unravelled. | |
| harrowcat | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/3/2007 |
| Elbeth is a sensible young lady to go to the one person who might have helped IF it really had been a ghost. The conclusion of this promises to be fun! I often think that one of the strengths of having Royalty in Britain is the Pomp and Ceremony which we do so very well. Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. Yes,Elbeth is indeed sensible to go to Aragorn.I hope you will like the conclusion. I agree the royal Pomp and Ceremony is one of BRitain's great strengths. | |