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A Little Nudge Out of the Door  by Jocelyn 1 Review(s)
rgbjReviewed Chapter: 14 on 12/25/2003
Well those poor dwarves and Moria.
Been on the long trek for only three years and they are worn out. The orcs have just gotten to be too many for them. They are no longer the hunted but the prey. You have a nice way with words. The tables are turned alright. The barely make this one. Adrenaline is great.
Nice to have his sister around she will take care of him. They are sleeping with their eyes closed! They are tired.
OOH Glorfindel and Langcyll's little talk. Well it had to be said. Langcyll has indeed become possessive and over protective just like Thranduil. What is it about warrior Legolas that makes people react to him in this manner? I mean he is a warrior after all. Glorfindel makes a good point when he points out that Thranduil's anger has been fueled by this encounter and while the king will not blame Langcyll because he had the right to direct Legolas this anger will fall full force on Legolas. Thranduil will perceive all the avoidance as being on his son's part. The hammer will descend when he sees Legolas again.
Great. Galadriel and Celeborn are sure cheerful.
Well Legolas had a very nice talk with his sister. It probably helped him get things in perspective. If only he had had someone like that he would have done the right thing and his father would have been appeased. And he is going to be an uncle!!
That d*mn mirror. All of middle earth gets to look into that mirror and get more confused than they already are. At least Galadriel is a true elf. True elves say both yes and no and speak in riddles. Only after the event do you see what they were talking about.
Oh and Haldir and his brothers are around. I liked them a lot. Glad to see them in your story.

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