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| Trumpet of the Swan by Jocelyn | 4 Review(s) |
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| Ladybird | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/23/2004 |
| What a Chapter, well worth the wait. You don't make it easy on them do you. Congratulations on the "love Scene" very well done, I must confess I was hoping that she would agree with him, but on reflection I agree with you that it wouldn't be that easy for her to fall in love. I find your characters very well written, you have made their conflicts believeable and I especially like Finarfin and Earwen, they have actual personalities and don't seem cowards, which is how many people portray them. I can't wait to see what they find out about C and G. You have talked nicely about Galadriel's desire to go to middle-earth, it seems perfectly reasonable that whe would wish to explore new places given how restless and eagar she is, yet she wants permission and definatly doesn't equate her desire with Feanor's- very interesting. It will be interesting as well to find out what her reactions are to the incident on the beach, I would imagine that she has some soul searching to do. Keep up the great work and update as soon as possible, though i know how it is with work. the chapter was well written with out the beta. Looking forward to the next. | |
| Iluvien | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/1/2003 |
| Feanor's a creep! i want to wring his little neck... then at least it wouldn't be a kinslaying! ^_~ lol... Celeborn is getting it bad. I've always liked him and Galadriel/Atranis as a couple - she's so volatile and he's so laid-back. They make a great pair. I can't wait til they go on a really long sailing trip - I bet that would be 'interesting' for the two of them. = ) ~Iluvien~ | |
| Iluvien | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/1/2003 |
| Another great chapter! Artanis is so smitten and she doesn't even know it... of course, that's like her. I can't wait to read the next chapter, so I'm going to go do that now. = ) ~Iluvien~ | |
| Iluvien | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/1/2003 |
| You have the honor of receiving my very first review on storiesofarda.com! = ) I heard about this site from an author on fanfiction.net, and I thought I would check it out. I can't believe that no one has reviewed your story yet. Of course, this could just be because not many people know about the site yet. Anyway, i love it so far. You've got great detail. I think I've only read one good Galadriel/Celeborn fic, and I'm very excited to read this one, since it has made such a good start. Great job, and keep writing... I'm, sure that more reviewers will mosey along eventually... = ) ~Iluvien~ | |