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Celebrían's Special Day  by Jay of Lasgalen 9 Review(s)
ElwenReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/20/2008
This should come with a screen wipe warning! I nearly spit tea all over my desk. ;)

elliskaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/2/2008
Hehehe! Hilarious! I love it! I hope she managed to not be cross with them. Since she was awake, they might want an explanation of why she was cross. ;-)

KittyReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/2/2008
Oh yes, I know where this came from ;-)
Even with certain persons changed, it is still such a sweet piece, and it was so nice and thoughtful of the twins to want to give their mother this begetting day surprise. And of course Elrond was giving her something as well ... *snicker*

Author Reply: I wanted to share this with a wider audience, and it seemed just right for Mother's Day. Thanks for reviewing again!

Jay

AlarielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/1/2008
Oh my gawd!!!! I almost laughed myself sick! Priceles, and wonderful job as usual!

Author Reply: I hope Elrond and Celebrían will laugh over it later - when they've got over the shock ...

Thanks for reviewing!

Jay

DotReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/1/2008
I think Ada’s giving her something as well.

ROTFL!! Hilarious. And the twins so sweetly earnest in wanting to surprise their mother...

(I think it's safer not to ask where the inspiration for this came from ;-)



Author Reply: *Grin* The twins have no idea what they've interrupted. (Thankfully, this isn't written from personal experience!)

Jay

SurgicalSteelReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/1/2008
*giggles immaturely*

Oh, that's priceless!

Author Reply: I used your expression 'marital activities' for this - I love it! I'm glad you enjoyed it.


Jay

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/1/2008
Okay! Trust children to interrupt! Heh!

Author Reply: What wonderful timing the twins have ... *Grin*


Jay

paranoidangelReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/1/2008
That's so sweet of Elladan and Elrohir to plan, but Elrond and Celebrían really should have thought that they might :) I'm still laughing over the ending.

Author Reply: Thanks, Nic! Perhaps Elrond and Celebrían should have locked the door.


Jay

EstelielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/1/2008
Heheh! Oh, this is so precious! Ha! And of course, Elrohir had a whole different thing in mind when he asked that question than what Elrond and Celebrían think he means! LOL!

So beautiful! This really brings a smile to face! Wonderful!

Nicely put together, too! You're a great author when it comes to 'puzzle-stories', when the pieces fit together in more than one way. Good job!

Esteliel

Author Reply: Thanks - I'm glad you enjoyed this. The twins have no idea what they've interrupted!

Jay

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