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The Finder  by Haleth 5 Review(s)
aelfwineReviewed Chapter: 3 on 7/24/2011
This is interesting . The irrisistable object meets the imoveable force LOL.

Author Reply: You know, that's a perfect way of describing the situation.

Thanks!

Medea SmykeReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/2/2009
All right, now I want to know what he's doing there in the first place.

Author Reply: That's a very good question, isn't it?

ziggyReviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/21/2008
Brilliant! I love this combination- Haleth is soooo grumpy! And Inglor just sweetly impervious. I am intrigued by the Arrow - and I love Haleth's overly dramatic self-importance too. Made me laugh.

Author Reply: Thank-you, Ziggy. Haleth isn't used to interacting with people on anything more than a very superficial level. She's probably hoping the grouchiness will drive Inglor away. (Fat chance of that.)

Haleth can be a bit over the top in a noble suffering/get the job done kind of way. She's probably just been alone too long and is taking herself too seriously. That's about to change.

Thanks again for the review.



perellethReviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/5/2008
Ah, I was wondering about the rest of the tale! I love Haleth's quiet stubborness, even hen she is owns and less that fit! Poor Inglor can't even guess what he has dragged home.

What I like most is the amount of implie infomration in the pauses and what is not sai. You eave us wit a glimpse of secrets and buried layers n noth of them in a very subtle manner. I really love these two characters.

Author Reply: Thank-you Perelleth. Haleth is stubborn. So is Inglor. She just doesn't realize it yet.

Neither of them really knows what to make of the other just yet. For whatever reason, Haleth doesn't entirely trust Inglor. He arrived at a very critical moment and it probably seems like too much of a coincidence for her to simply accept him.

Thanks again.

Haleth

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/5/2008
Thankyou for the chapter Haleth!, I wondered where you had gone, and also I was glad to know somewhat of her heritage, that was very interesting and mysterious, as usual you give hints but don't tell everything to keep us intrigued(and believe me I am dying to know)Well written and now I hope another chapter will be coming, also I am glad I wasn't sick while reading this because I think it would have made me feel sicker LOL! Hugs The Imp

Author Reply: Thank-you for reviewing, Elfingimp. Sorry for the long delay between chapters. I'll really try to get the final chapter up soon.

Thanks for the comment about being happy you weren't sick while reading this chapter. I was really trying for drowning-in-her-own-lungs misery.

Haleth


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