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While We Dwelt in Fear  by Pearl Took 3 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/4/2005
Beautifully written.

Author Reply: Thank you for the two kind responses :) I hope you stay with the story. Thank you again :)

Beethovens7thReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/26/2004
As always with your stories, beautiful details, very visual, I could just see a worried mother leaning against the glass. And every important detail seen too. How lovely of Esmerelda to write to the other parents. (but couldn't she have just emailed them? what? no email in middle earth?)

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/27/2004
A promising beginning! Looking forward to reading more (tomorrow, I hope)!

I especially liked this part: "and the Took in him would be off with Pippin on a lads' adventure"

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