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| To See A World by Nightwing | 776 Review(s) |
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| Bakoneko | Reviewed Chapter: Author's Notes on 12/10/2020 |
| Lori ~ I’m so late getting to these last few chapters, I don’t know if you will ever read this. I can only hope that you are still with us and hope that you may have had a turnaround in your health. I want you to know that I have loved To See A World for years. Even without an ending, I know I’ll be coming back and rereading this story again and again. Thank you for the gift of your imagination and your skill at storytelling. I’m glad that writing it brought you joy, because reading it has certainly brought me joy. Blessed be. ❤️ | |
| Luisa | Reviewed Chapter: Author's Notes on 2/14/2018 |
| Dear Lori, I just found "To see a world" a few days ago on fanfiction.net and it's become my favourite story after only a few chapters. Your writing is incredible and I can't thank you enough for the time I got to spend reading it. Personally, I loved the way you wrote Legolas being blind and trying to adjust to everything. To be completely honest, I'd even prefer it if he never regained his sight as I do think that even blind, he's as strong as ever, if not stronger because of all he had had to endure. Also, Aragorn was amazing in this story. The way he was always there for Legolas and helped him through it all, being as selfless as ever, really made me love him even more than I already do and you've done a marvellous job at portraying their friendship. I will for sure read the story again, And more than just once, and I want to thank you again for this beautiful piece of work. Reading that you got cancer really shocked me, and as saddened as I am, I still do hope that you find a way to win the fight against this terrible illness. I wish you all the best and hope that you find happiness. With love, Luisa | |
| Marisa | Reviewed Chapter: Author's Notes on 1/28/2018 |
| Dear Lori, I've been reading your story and I enjoyed the suspense. I am so sorry to learn of your illness. I don't know if you will still be able to check these reviews, but may God bless you and heal you and grant you peace in His forgiveness and love. I pray that you turn to Him in your need. | |
| Starlight and Moonlight | Reviewed Chapter: Author's Notes on 1/18/2018 |
| Lori, I just wanted to tell you that I am so sorry that you got cancer. When I first read your note, I cried. I'm not kidding. I cried not because the story wasn't going to be finished, but because it really is a shame that cancer found you. I want to say that you are a really great writer. Your story is unbelievably fascinating; you are my favorite Lord of the Rings fan fiction author. You're extremely talented, and I am sure that if you put your mind to it, you could have published a novel. I just wanted to say again that you are very gifted in the art of writing. Lori, I am really, truly sorry that you got cancer. Be at peace, mellon-nin. | |
| Hawaiichick | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/6/2017 |
| That was such a perfect scene with little Legolas and his loving mother. An interesting contrast between how he felt about his mother and how he felt about his father. And well, a liitle Legolas is truly adorable! Aragon's devotion and brotherly love for Legolas is just so very wonderful to picture as well. | |
| Hawaiichick | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 4/6/2017 |
| Well, this was an emotionaly intense chapter....and how wonderful it is! :) Amazing effort and heartbreaking despair by Aragorn. I love their deep brotherly bond. | |
| Hawaiichick | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/5/2017 |
| Oh, all the wonderful feels! Legolas' pain and Aragorn's fear and despair was just heartbreaking. And I loved that flashback. The banter and brotherly love between the two is written with such talent. I loved the comparison that, despite being centuries older than Aragorn, Legolas still has a lightness that normally only the young have. You described it perfectly. What a beautiful way with words you have. | |
| Hawaiichick | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/5/2017 |
| Oh wow! What an amazing start. I love how you've shown Aragon and Legolas' friendship. How their friendship is effortless and natural even though they are from two different species. Your Legolas sonetimes has this ethereal otherworldly gentleness and distinction, it's pure perfection. I am so excited to read more of this story. | |
| Molly | Reviewed Chapter: Author's Notes on 3/27/2017 |
| I have followed this story since it began and it has always been--will always be--one of my favorites. My heart is heavy that someone who has brought me so much enjoyment and has such talent should be facing such a diagnosis. I am profoundly sad--and profoundly touched that facing what you are, you thought to give us one last update. Thank you for the many, many hours of reading this beautiful story. I wish you peace. | |
| Bev | Reviewed Chapter: Author's Notes on 3/27/2017 |
| Dear Lori, I have no words, the sadness is overwhelming. TSAW is gold. Farewell | |