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To See A World  by Nightwing 10 Review(s)
WinterwitchReviewed Chapter: 51 on 3/26/2015
Great chapter! Ramhar and his un-ensorcered behaviour is very believable and felt very real, but it must have been very difficult for them all to finally deal with him. Having Legolas in the small company is understandably a difficult thing, and I really liked how you dealt with the issue. The part with the owl flight and only Legolas noticing it was great. :o)

Rose613Reviewed Chapter: 51 on 2/21/2015
Keep going with the story, I like it alot!

KeeterReviewed Chapter: 51 on 2/12/2015
Will there be any more of this? I'm so invested in this story!!! Please, please write more!

MarianelReviewed Chapter: 51 on 1/10/2015
Im intrigued by the foul brew Malcovan gave to Rahmar and that Rahmar dislikes proper wine. He must be feeling what we call drug abstinence symptoms! What people on drugs do for more drugs never cease to amaze me and neither when it comes to how ruthless the bosses of the dealers and the addicted are! Malcovan is the big criminal boss here! Sundering friends and families. I hope Aragorn and Co get their hands on him! I must say it again how much Arath is one of my favorites:) Keep up the good work!

TariReviewed Chapter: 51 on 1/9/2015
I really enjoy reading this story. Perhaps when it is done I will reread it intact.

ReaderKitReviewed Chapter: 51 on 1/7/2015
Okay, this is incredible. Not only engaging, but how realistic you write shines through. I love how you have gone through the stages of Legolas dealing with blindness, and done it in such a way that both honors and empathizes with those who have this affliction. And I am thinking that his being blind will prevent him from falling to the sorcerer, which is a fun twist. Love it all!

WindsingerReviewed Chapter: 51 on 1/6/2015
Oh, I am so glad you are continuing this story! It is one of the best I have read and I check for new chapters regularly. Love the new challenge you are leading Aragorn and Legolas into. Thank you SO much for this story!!!!!

NalediReviewed Chapter: 51 on 1/6/2015
Happy New Year!

I'm always excited to receive a chapter update for TSAW and now I'm left wanting even more, because you've really ramped up the tension. I like the idea that Malcovan used some kind of drug or enchantment to keep Ramhar under his control. I almost felt sorry for him when Legolas pressed him to see the truth and Ramhar was unable to believe that Malcovan had forced him to believe a lie all these years.

What a terrible thought that he's now doing the same to the boy (sorry - can't remember his name!)I hope Aragorn and Legolas manage to find him in time.

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 51 on 1/6/2015
I'm so glad you are continuing this. The tension continues to rise. A very exciting chapter.

CelethReviewed Chapter: 51 on 1/5/2015
Thank you for the update! I was so looking forward to the next chapter, and now finally we find out what happened.

But so much is still unresolved: rescuing the boy, bringing Malcovan to justice, and most of all, healing Legolas' blindness. I could not bear it if the story ends without him regaining his sight, even if I know that by the time of the LOTR, there was no trace of any blindness.

I hope the next chapter will come soon, even if reading about Malcovan gives me goosebumps.

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