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To See A World  by Nightwing 10 Review(s)
Tiinaj1Reviewed Chapter: 52 on 3/30/2016
I was reading this on fanfiction.net and you mentioned you were also posting on this site - I sure hope you finish this. It's VERY well written & interesting!

BakonekoReviewed Chapter: 52 on 3/30/2016
I can't tell you how excited I was to see new chapter notifications for this story! The new revelations about Ramhar are very interesting and have definitely left me feeling like our protagonists like I'm really not sure what his next move will be, I just know I don't trust him for a second! Legolas's arm definitely worries me. And I can't wait for them to catch up to Malcovan. He seems almost omniscient if not quite omnipotent, but they're right that they've traveled with a very powerful wizard and seen his weaker, more human moments, so that can give them some insight that might help them in dealing with this guy. I'm dying to see how it plays out! Thanks for continuing to share!

EordemaegReviewed Chapter: 52 on 4/4/2015
I have been waiting for this chapter anxiously. It's a great pleasure to be reading this story, and I shall certainly continue to do so.

ReaderKitReviewed Chapter: 52 on 3/30/2015
Fun chapter; I am happy you finally got it to cooperate. I like the fun details you added: 'The Thinker,' Legolas warning Rambar about his horse, etc. Yay for bringing back the warrior braids! And Coll is going to be trouble, isn't he?

Reviewed Chapter: 52 on 3/28/2015
Loved it! And was SO excited to see another chapter. I just love your attention to detail and talent in making it so rich and layered. Can't wait for the next installment!!!

WinterwitchReviewed Chapter: 52 on 3/26/2015
Yay, Legolas braided his hair! :o) I'm so happy to see him finding another piece of himself back, and I love how proud and able he looks when they set out!
And now I'm so curious what is going to happen in that cave!

elizaReviewed Chapter: 52 on 3/26/2015
Good for you Legolas!! Blind or not, still a force to be reckoned with. As always excellent writing. The building tension is driving me crazy. lol

TariReviewed Chapter: 52 on 3/24/2015
But when it came out, it did a wonderful job of it. I keep hoping Legolas will regain his sight. When the final chapter is written, I plan to start reading again from the beginning. Until next time, thanks for a great chapter.

ellonReviewed Chapter: 52 on 3/24/2015
I've been waiting a long time for you to continue this story. I love that it is an entirely unique and original work. I can't even tell you how excited and happy I am that you are finally coming back to work on this piece! Hopefully the next chapter won't be so long in the coming!

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 52 on 3/24/2015
I understand and empathize with long delays in postings. Some chapters nearly write themselves, while others have to be drawn out slowly, painfully, word by word.

This one was worth waiting for.

Three of my favorite parts:
A pale light had dawned, growing steadily in the eastern sky as Aragorn wound strips of cloth through his horse's harness to mute the jingle. It was a morning of frost; the dried grasses glittered as the slow rays of the sun settled upon them. A blackbird winged swiftly overhead, its calling voice thin on the winter air.
Masterful description. Pulls me right into the scene. I feel almost that I am there.

The description of Legolas and Firestar... wonderful!

This:
"Indeed. And I have had other names for you too."

"I'm sure of it," the ranger said, eyeing his friend thoughtfully.

(made me chuckle. The sound of friendship)

Oh, a fourth favorite part: Legolas' observation about the wolves!

Tightly written, sets the scene, ratchets up the tension. Looking forward to more. I was glad to read this update.

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