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Bombur's Diet  by Primsong 5 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/14/2008
Ah--most delightful! And Bilbo is wise enough to let him have something, at least. Love the conversation with the stomach! Such wonderful comments it makes! Heh!

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/14/2008
This is so much fun. And as someone who is trying not to turn into Bombur herself I do feel for him!

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/14/2008
Oh, this is the funniest chapter yet, from Bombur's conversation with his stomach to Bifur's fright at Bilbo's appearance (I splorked at the line "What do you want me to wear a wig to wake you up?" LOLOLOL!)

And then catching Bombur in the act: all the time when Bifur was confronting him, I kept wonderting where Bilbo was. I should have known.

And then--Bilbo's little bit of soft-heartedness at the end, just made me go "awww...."

I do love your Bilbo so much!

NeiliaReviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/13/2008
I have been enjoying this jolly tale immensely! Poor Bombur, it is hard to learn new eating habits...really hard...I haven't learned yet! Hugs, Neilia

Kitt OtterReviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/13/2008
Oh, bad, bad Bombur! His conversations with his stomach are wonderful... no, maybe disturbing. *g* Lucky that Bilbo woke; geesh, Bifur and Bofur do have their hands full. Bilbo really should be more careful about whose sleep he intrudes. (He has quite a bad history of it).
Ha, Bilbo is too clever. His appearence in Bombur's room gave me a jump. *laughing* Very nice of the former Burgler to slip Bombur the pie.
By the way, I love the chapter titles.
-Kitt : )

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