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A Secret Gate  by Antane 4 Review(s)
shireboundReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/13/2008
That is absolutely beautiful, Antane. And Rose's analogy to a baby being born is wonderful:

. "It is very painful and a mite frightening, but at the end, you have this beautiful new being."

Author Reply: Thank you so much, dear shirebound! Glad all the angst didn't scare you off! :)

Namarie, God bless, *hugs*, Antane :)

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/13/2008
Beautiful as always Antane. Fitting that Rosie sees the furthest at this moment and the birthing image is lovely.

One small typo - well if her heart had already been tied to Sam. I think you mean 'Had not'.

Author Reply: Yeah, I noticed that little/big typo later and fixed it. Hantanyel, dear harrowcat, for another lovely review. :)

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

ArmarielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/13/2008
Sweet! Love the birthing image.:):):)


LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/13/2008
That Rosie can see what Frodo and Sam cannot as yet is excellent, as is the metaphor of giving birth. They will see one day, however.

Author Reply: Hantanyel, my dear Larner - so glad you enjoyed! This was a neat one to write.

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

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