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| The Storm by Linda Hoyland | 12 Review(s) |
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| Edlyn | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/30/2008 |
| Oh, this was gorgeous and very sexy and romantic to boot! I can just see Aragorn in the rain (what a piece of eye candy!). I certainly envy Arwen Your descriptions are soi very good! Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm delighted you enjoyed my story. I would love to have been in that garden with Arwen! | |
| harrowcat | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/29/2008 |
| Very vivid Linda. I like Arwen chellenging Aragorn's ranger skills! :) BTW I am following your re-writes etc on the other site but i don't like reviewing there. Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm pleased you enjoyed this story and are enjoying my rewrites.Thank you for letting me know. | |
| Estelcontar | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/27/2008 |
| Lovely story Linda. The fact that Aragorn earned for shelter and comfort in his days in the wild, and now that he has both earns for the freedom of the outside is very life like. Aragorn and Arwen dancing in the storm, what a vivid and joyful scene. Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm delighted you enjoyed the story.I agree the grass is always greener on the other side of the fence! | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/27/2008 |
| I'm glad Aragorn and Arwen can revel in nature's pulsing wildness... and their own. :) Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I like to imagine Aragorn and Arwen so happy together! | |
| Calenlass Greenleaf | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/27/2008 |
| *drools slightly* Bad of me, but…images of a half-dressed Aragorn does that to me. Love the romance in this. It’s sweet but not sappy, and the storm was a nice touch. ~Cal Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm pleased you liked the story.I don't write much romance,so I'm pleased this worked for you. | |
| Ainu Laire | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/27/2008 |
| Aww! What a cute, romantic one shot. I do like it quite a bit. One small correction. You put "peredhil"; it should be "peredhel" (peredhel is singular while peredhil is plural, and in the context singular is the one you want). Cheers! Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm pleased you liked the story.Thank you too for the correction,which I've put in.I'm always pleased when people tell me about typos. | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/26/2008 |
| A passionate story - nice to see the King and Queen getting out and really enjoying Nature! Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I think they are experiencing Nature in all her varieties! I'm pleased you enjoyed the story. | |
| Radbooks | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/26/2008 |
| Very nice images! Author Reply: Thank you! I'm pleased you liked it. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/26/2008 |
| A wonderful interlude between the two of them! So delightful! Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm pleased you liked the story. | |
| 6336 | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/26/2008 |
| I can understand how Aragorn could feel trapped in his new life, instead of just leaving when he feels like it he now has to let his 'nannies' know where he is going. Arwen probably is not as affected having lived a more normal life in Imlardris. Like most newly weds, just can't keep their hands off each other can they? Shakes head! More please, Lynda Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm delighted you enjoyed this.I fear poor Aragorn must be driven mad at times by the restrictions upon him now! I hope my Aragorn and Arwen Muses will co-operate again soon.There is an angsty scene between them in my other new story,"Dies Iare." | |