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Sundry Scrolls III  by Raksha The Demon 6 Review(s)
Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 6 on 3/23/2009
I absolutely loved the fact that the boy was going to ask the elves if they used skates at the Helcaraxe.....

Very nicely written... and well researched : )

Author Reply: It just seemed to me to be the type of question that a bright kid who's read the Silm would ask, now that he's seen lots of people, including Elves, skate on something less dangerous than the Helcaraxe.

Thanx for reading and reviewing, Agape.

CeleritasReviewed Chapter: 6 on 3/22/2009
Tee hee! Barahir is already quite the little scholar, and I loved how he applied his lessons to the situation at hand, even if he had nothing to worry about. This was lovely, and definitely gave the title's subject matter a different meaning.

Author Reply: Thanx for reviewing, Celeritas! I think his parents (Elboron and wife) would have read to him from The Silmarillion; the old tales would not have been ignored in the House of Faramir; also, they had real Elves living not so far away in Ithilien, not to mention a Queen whose great-grandmother (and great-great-grandparents) crossed the original Helcaraxe.

And don't we all, at some point or another, have a metaphorical Helcaraxe to cross?

NestaReviewed Chapter: 6 on 3/21/2009
How sweet! And how Barahir's imagination must have feasted on those old tales.

I think the crossing of the Helcaraxe is one of the most striking episodes in the Silmarillion - this is a delightful 'reduced version'.

Author Reply: I wish that Tolkien had elaborated on the crossing; it's definitely dramatic. I think Barahir was a very imaginative kid; too. Glad you enjoyed the piece!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 6 on 3/21/2009
What a marvelous scene! And (being me) I wonder if Shire folk ever visited the new northern city and enjoyed their own skating parties. :)

Author Reply: I planted Pippin and his son Faramir in the scene; and I'm sure that Merry and his family came up sometimes; and we know that Sam and his family visited Annuminas at least once. I would think that the more adventurous Shire-folk would have loved to come to the King's new/old city. Thanx for the review, Shirebound!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 6 on 3/21/2009
Aha! The child is a conqueror in his own right, then, even if the Helcaraxe is merely in his imagination! Ah, I miss teaching right now!

Author Reply: We all have had something like the Helcaraxe to conquer as kids; something that looms big and scary or reminds us of something truly frightening. But Barahir is a strong-minded kid, and Faramir a good teacher and loving grandfather...Thanx for reading and reviewing!

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 6 on 3/21/2009
A delightful glimpse of an obviously loving relationship between Faramir and his grandson. I loved the way Faramir explains to the child and calms his fears. I should love to read how Faramir learned to skate!

Author Reply: Every time I try to organize thoughts for a piece on Faramir learning to skate, my muse starts pestering me for a wintry Arathorn story, and then abandoning me when I try to oblige. Fickle muse! Someday I'll get both ideas on paper.

Glad you liked the story; thanx for reviewing!

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