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Rainbow Drabbles  by Jay of Lasgalen 6 Review(s)
ellieReviewed Chapter: 8 on 9/3/2009
These are all haunting and beautifully done.

Elena TirielReviewed Chapter: 8 on 8/14/2009
Very beautiful, Jay! The imagery is vivid and stunning in its emotional impact.

Well done!

- Barbara

Independence1776Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 8/13/2009
Stunning imagery. It somewhat reminds me of "In Flanders Fields."

Wonderful drabble!

~ Indy

Author Reply: Yes, the poppies in Flanders were very much in my mind as I wrote this - hence the title!


LarnerReviewed Chapter: 8 on 8/13/2009
You know--great minds think alike! I had just started writing a story in which I was headed to much the same imagery, although it will be far longer than a drabble when I get it done! Heh!

Author Reply: Oh, I shall look forward to reading that! I always like to see how different writers produce totally different tales from a similar prompt.


Mum's the WordReviewed Chapter: 8 on 8/13/2009
Devastatingly beautiful.

Thank you, Jay.

Author Reply: Thank you!

VilwarinReviewed Chapter: 8 on 8/13/2009
Ah, that gives a really nice image and also is a fitting allegory. Thanks for sharing. Cheers, Vilwarin.

Author Reply: I've seen several pictures of the poppies in Flanders, so this scene was easy to write - I could see it so clearly!

Thanks for reviewing.


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