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Yew  by Pearl Took 5 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 14 on 10/1/2010
Poor Pippin and Yew, although Yew will be much happier where folks aren't likely to try to kill him every time they see him.

Pip4Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 9/18/2010
I love this story, it's so sweet. I like how the relationship between Yew and Pippin, and yew and everyone else has progressed.

Author Reply: Thank you so much, Pip4! Glad you're enjoying the story. :-)

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 14 on 9/16/2010
Wonderful chapter!

Radagast is the best person Gandalf could have chosen to bring Yew safely to his new home.

I loved the farewell scene behind the stables and the wishes Pippin and Yew had for each other.

I think Paladin is as sad about parting with Yew as his little lad is, although as a reasonable adult he knows that they can't keep the dragon. Still, he's young enough to be impressed by Pippin's "statue trick" ;-)

Author Reply: LOL Yes, Paladin is still young at heart.

Radagast will do a fine job, I'm sure.

Thank you so much, Andrea, for leaving a comment! :-)

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 14 on 9/16/2010
Ahh...*sniff*
Lovely chapter. Yes, Radagast will be a great person to settle Yew.

Hope you don't mind me mentioning it. One slight jarring note but maybe only to me. (Merry volunteered to help his cousin police the various relatives and acquaintances ) police is a very modern word for middle earth. You could substitute 'sheriff'.

Author Reply: Sorry about that, harrowcat. That's what I get for not having all my chapters vetted by Dreamflower. I don't know if 'sheriff' can be a verb like 'police' can. I'll see what else I can come up with.

I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter otherwise. :-)

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 14 on 9/15/2010
"Be careful. Have a good life wherever it is Gandalf is taking you.” The child was sniffing every few words. “I hope you end up with a very nice cave and a lovely large hoard.”

Awwwww. :)

Author Reply: Pippin is a very tender hearted lad, as we well know.
Thank you so much, shirbound :-)

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