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Brother, where art thou?  by Laikwalâssê 6 Review(s)
pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/6/2010
I wonder what that village's problem is. The elves have always been good to them. That man is crazy, Elladan is in troubel, big trouble...

Author Reply: the man is crazy and the townspeople are only afraid of him and you are right, Elladan is in very big trouble. Thanks for reviewing. Lai

Selene AduialReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/29/2009
Wow, A chilling start to your new story.
Poor Elladan, they really got to him badly. I just hope the other elves will find him in time. I can't wait for more.

Hugs Selene

Author Reply: Hello Petra, thank you so much for reviewing. I really appreciate it, especially from you. I´m glad you like the beginning of my new story and yes it´s chilling. Find him in time? Where would be the fun? I promise to update soon. Many hugs. Lai

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/28/2009
Well, one individual will remember his arrival, a least.

Author Reply: Yes, but will Elrond and Elrohir find out in time and can he really help them? Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Lai

ViresseReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/27/2009
Oh no! poor Elladan! Elrohir can hear Elladan when he called out to him, then Elrohir felt that Elladan was still alive.... so at least Elladan was ok that moment. But Elrohir could not communicate with his twin afterwards, things could not be good either. What happened to Elladan then? Did the water flow him somewhere on-shore but no help?

I can't wait to see how Elrohir & Elrond punish Harad! Please update soon.

Author Reply: poor Elladan, indeed and it´s really a bad sign that Elrohir can´t feel his brother anymore and yes, Elrond and Elrohir are not really amused when they find out what Harrad had done to Elladan. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I promise to update soon. Lai

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/26/2009
(That should read 'least'. I knew I should have previewed!)

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/26/2009
Eek!!

I know Elladan won't die (at lest, he'd better not!) but how on earth will he survive this?

I'd like to see Elrohir's revenge when he finds out what the two men have done to his brother :>)


Jay


Author Reply: No, he´d better not, but can Elrohir cling to this hope as well? The men should indeed go out of Elrohir´s way when he finds out. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Lai

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