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Brother, where art thou?  by Laikwalâssê 5 Review(s)
pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 3 on 4/6/2010
elrohir is determined to find his brother, I hope he finds him soon...

Author Reply: yes, Elrohir is determined, but he may be shocked what he finds out. Thanks for reading. Lai

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/15/2010
Definitely they should not give up as long as Elrohir feels his brother's presence somewhere nearby.

Now, to find him!

Hope the youth doesn't suffer for the information given, but have no hope for that, considering the mayor and his son.

Author Reply: Elrohir will definitely not give up, but even he knows that their time is running short. I hope with you for the youth, but the mayor and his son is a bad lot. Thank you so much for reviewing. Lai

ellieReviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/19/2009
interesting story! I hope you haven't killed off Elladan! I look forward to seeing what happens next.

Author Reply: Hello ellie. I´m glad you are enjoying the story. Killed Elladan off? Stay with me to the next chapter and you will have a small glimpse of what happened to him. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Lai

ViresseReviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/14/2009
When knowing how Celon suffered, somehow seemed to relive Elladan's horror. Luckily Elrohir can still feel his twin (or is that his own imagination only?).

It's scary to know "Sometimes he had the feeling that the thread connecting them was vanishing entirely." Please let them find Elladan soon, don't let it be too late!

I wonder if Elrond is sensing something darker if he's already accepted Elladan is dead.

Yes, must punish the mayor and Harad!

Author Reply: let us hope that it is not his imagination and that Elrond is not sensing something darker. Stay with me and you will find out. I´m glad you are enjoying the story. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Lai

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/12/2009
Elrohir's quite right! Of course they can't leave without searching for some trace of Elladan, even if it was just to find his body. (Which they won't, of course ... will they?)




Author Reply: for Elrohir´s sake I hope they will find Elladan and not just his body. Please stay with me and find out. Thank you so much for the review. Lai

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