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Brother, where art thou?  by Laikwalâssê 4 Review(s)
pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 6 on 4/6/2010
Well, at least Elladan has awoken, but he is in terrible shape...

Author Reply: he has woken yes, but I can so sympathized with Isiwen and Maren. They are rather helpless despite they good intentions. I feel so sorry for them. Lai

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 6 on 1/15/2010
All too likely thoughts and dreads to entertain in such a case!

Author Reply: poor Elrond indeed. Better to go on quickly to relieve the tension. Thank you for staying with my story. Lai

ViresseReviewed Chapter: 6 on 1/8/2010
No...you can't stop there. Elrond's last line is hanging in my head "He would come too late to save his son"!

Like how you paint Isiwen's fascination of meeting and speaking to an elf for the first time, like how nice Elladan's personality is that he'll say "Thank you" even though he's in such a horrible state to think and talk. Oh no...I echo Isiwen's thought... truly truly worry for Elladan's life! Please update soon.

Author Reply: Hi Viresse. The next chapter is already with my beta. Very glad you liked Isiwen´s fascination. Think she is acting like I would when meeting an elf...sigh.
Now, Elrond should really hurry! Thank you so much for still reading and reviewing. Lai

Selene AduialReviewed Chapter: 6 on 1/7/2010
Even though I know what will happen, I still find myself drawn into the story reading it here. Way to go, my friend.
Hugs Selene

Author Reply: Dear Petra, thank you so much for the review. I´m glad you still like my story. And thank you again for your help for making this readable and your constant encouragement. Iris

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