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| Brother, where art thou? by Laikwalâssê | 5 Review(s) |
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| Fiondil | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 6/3/2010 |
| I read this a few weeks ago and meant to leave a review but real life got in the way (bleh!). I really enjoyed this story. It was full of suspense and there were times when I was (metaphorically speaking) biting my nails and sitting on the edge of my seat wondering if they were going to find Elladan in time. I liked the way the Elves dealt with the evil mayor and his despicable son and the way they rewarded the young couple who cared for Elladan. A well thought-out story with a very satisfying ending. Author Reply: Hi Fiondil, thanks so much for the review. I´ve nearly forgotten about the story, albeit it was always my favourite. I´m glad you liked the story and that the suspense worked. Hope you have any nails left? I considered how the elves should deal with the men and thought first about something like a death sentence, but then remembered that elves would not like kinslaying und resented to this version and many agreed with me including you. Thanks! I liked the young couple also very much and the reward at the end was well given and my wish. I had done it this way. Thanks for the time to share your thoughts. I realy appreciate it. Lai | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 4/6/2010 |
| Glad the town has a new leader, wouldn't mind hearing a sequel... Author Reply: I´ve not planned a sequel but one never knows...it´s a tempting thought. Again thank you so much for all your thoughts. It was a delight to answer to them. Hope to see you at my other stories too. Lai. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 2/25/2010 |
| Good ending to a difficult situation. Nicely handled, with the Men dealing with their own. Sorry the old man was killed, though. Author Reply: I was not sure about how to handle the men. First I thought about that the only answer to this crime could be death, but elves are sentitive about kinslaying and so I deemed it best to let the men deal with their own. I´m glad you like the ending. Thanks so much for following the story and for reviewing. Lai | |
| Viresse | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 2/18/2010 |
| Love this chapter and thanks for this story. Hope to read more from you soon, with Elladan if possible :) Author Reply: Hi Viresse, you are most welcome. Thank you so much for your constant encouragement and the time for reviewing. My next story is already with my beta. Lai | |
| ellie | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 2/18/2010 |
| Nicely concluded. I like the gifts left for the couple. That was very sweet and well deserved! Author Reply: Hello ellie. Thank you for the praise. Yes, these two did really deserve the gifts. I liked to write about them. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Lai | |