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The King Who Wanted to Live Forever  by DADGAD 11 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 1/15/2010
Quite the epilogue.

Again, thanks for this one, I think.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 7 on 1/15/2010
What a moral! And not just failed Elves, but failed Men as well!

Thanks for a charming, if dark, tale!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 6 on 1/15/2010
Interesting way for Herod to become Santa, and failed Elves become his Elves....

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 5 on 1/15/2010
Well, Namo offered him the choice....

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/15/2010
He's fallen for the tricks of the Deceiver, I see. Poor Herod!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/15/2010
Sauron, Melkor, or Saruman? Seems he might have the heat of Orodruin behind him....

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/15/2010
Herod is indeed having a bad day, isn't he? Three Istari have just escaped, and strange portents have been noted over Bethlehem!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/15/2010
I recognize Daeron so far. Now to see who else turns up.

Sounds as if this guy is far too much into expediency! Maybe he needs to be deposed!

RhyselleReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 12/30/2009
*Stares at the screen, jaw dropped*

This was just... I am without words.

May I nominate this story for the Middle-earth Fanfiction Awards next year?

Just... Wow!

Author Reply: Dear Rhysylle,
Thanks for the review! I was quite pleased with this story but not sure how it would be received on SoA. Very pleased if you want to put it into MEFA.
Have a very happy new year!

Dadgad

CeleritasReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/23/2009
Holy Elbereth, this has to be one of the best Middle-earth/Real World/Christianity fusions I have ever read. Honestly most of the power came from the sheer novelty and creepiness of the Herod/Santa idea, but the touches of elves and wizards were also lovely.

What a nice throwback to the old Christmas tradition of ghost stories!

Author Reply: Thanks for the review, Celeritas. We have a good tradition of ghost stories here in Scotland, but much of the inspiration from this one came from Charles Causley's poem. Its been put to music and I have a great version but the British folk duo Show of Hands.
All the best for 2010! Dadgad

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