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The Abduction of Éomer, King of Rohan  by Lialathuveril 9 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 6 on 7/29/2010
She still is mistaken regarding his identity. And he's willing to continue playing along. At least she's falling for him--hard!

Author Reply: Very hard! But she won't thank Eomer for it when she finds out!

VirtuellaReviewed Chapter: 6 on 4/1/2010
"my boat. Or at least the boat I had stolen! " LOL!

Hey, I would have preferred the dark rye bread anyway!

You're building this up nicely!



Author Reply: I prefer dark bread, too. Although I've read that even 'white' bread in Medieval times was what we'd call wholemeal nowadays. And the really dark stuff had bits of grit in it, which wore down your teeth. But I'm digressing!

whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 6 on 2/26/2010
It seems to me that Leona is enjoying the outing a lot, despite the discomfort. I almost don't want them to reach Minas Tirith at this rate, even if I'm wondering how Lothy's family, Aragorn and the Rohirrim are taking this back in Cormallen.

Author Reply: Hello Whitewave,
I think the 'outing' must be a nice change from the mounting pressures of his position, so it's quite likely he's enjoying it. As for what's going on in Cormallen, that won't come out for a while, but I'm sure Imrahil at least will be busy!

Thanks for reviewing.
Lia

RadbooksReviewed Chapter: 6 on 2/26/2010
This is such a fun story! I'm really enjoying it, you paint very vivid pictures of both the landscape they're traveling through and the characters and what they're 'traveling through'. :)

Author Reply: Hello Radbooks,
I had (and am having) lots of fun writing this, too. And I live about half an hour's drive from the Rhine, so we sometimes go for walks along there. That's the kind of river I picture in my mind, only mostly untouched by man.

Thanks for reviewing!
Lia

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 6 on 2/25/2010
Ah, I can see she is beginning to fancy him! Eagerly awaiting more!

Author Reply: Hello Linda,
like she said, maybe she's abducted the right man ;-) And I'm already working on the next chapter, so it shouldn't be too long.

Again, many thanks for reviewing and I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story as well!
Lia

CrumpetReviewed Chapter: 6 on 2/25/2010
"I found it difficult to concentrate on my food with such a lot of wet man sitting there..."

I think I'd have a hard time concentrating across from a wet "Leona" too! Loved this, loving the story so far. More, please!

Author Reply: Hello Crumpet,
yes, Lothiriel is doing her best in a difficult situation ;-) The hardships of river travelling...

Thanks for reviewing!
Lia

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 6 on 2/25/2010
Poor confused Lothiriel she thinks she's falling for the wrong man! LOL! Poor Eomer when she finds out! I can't wait. He!He! Hugs The Imp

Author Reply: Hello Imp,
I'm feeling a little sorry for the two as well! In a way they're both struggling with their emotions and how to express them. But you're right in that there might be some fireworks further along...

Lia

galimerilReviewed Chapter: 6 on 2/24/2010
awww! I can't wait for the reveal! This is such an interesting story! Love it!

Galimeril ;D

Author Reply: Hello Galimeril,
you will have to wait a little longer, for I'm not done playing with them yet ;-)

Lia

FantasiaReviewed Chapter: 6 on 2/24/2010
She is falling hard for him, no doubt. It is really a nice trip for them, they will know each other well before reaching the city. Eomer will be in a lot of trouble when she finds out who Leona really is.

Author Reply: Hello Fantasia,
I agree, she's falling hard for Léona. Too bad a simple rider from Rohan is not suitable husband material for a princess of Dol Amroth ;-) And I also agree that there might be trouble looming on the horizon...

Lia

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