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| Half-Brother by Ellie | 6 Review(s) |
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| Red Squirrel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/5/2014 |
| Ugh....leave it to Fëanor to act like a spoiled brat on such a joyous occasion. LOL...I enjoyed it though (so IC!) ;-) Farafin, indeed, is not like his elder half brother. Indis is probably eternally grateful for that! I really enjoyed this little story...nothing is sweeter than a new born baby...except, maybe newborn elflings! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/14/2010 |
| What a different reception--and how joyful for the child's mother! Not at all as it was last time! Indis raised her son so well! Author Reply: Sorry for the late reply to this review. Indis did raise her son well! She did have caouse enough to fear but Arafniwe is most unlike his elder half-brother. Thanks for reading and reviewing! | |
| Kaylee Tonks-Lupin | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/9/2010 |
| Hee! You got me, too! So Fiondil beta'ed this for you, did he? Always pleased to read any work he's been involved in. :) Also I love any story with Arafinwe involved! Heh, I was COMPLETELY baffled by Feanoro's apparent about-face here! Is Houro your OC or is this a canonical thing? (Sorry if I spelled his name wrong, still getting used to this all too flat keyboard) You SO got me! Good work :) I loved it, especially the fact that Arafinwe is more accepting of a younger half brother than Feanor was. (What really threw me is I knew Feanor only had two half brothers unless you were going for an OC so I was thinking 'what...'? And then it wasn't Feanor anyway! Hee, I'm rambling...sorry!) So here I am reading fic instead of studying last minute on the day of my monthly finals...well, I couldn't help it, this one was too good. Thanks for the read! Kaylee! Author Reply: Yep, I was lucky to get a bit of Fiondil's time to help me out. Arafinwe is one of my favorites and a favortie of my muse :-) Huoro is one of my OC's. You can find more about him in my stories The Return to Joy, Second Love, and Kin No More. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for reading and reviewing! | |
| Fiondil | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/9/2010 |
| I'm glad you posted this, Ellie. I enjoyed it as much the second time around as the first. Of course, the second time around I wasn't as confused as to who was who as I was the first time around. *grin* You did a masterful job of making the reader think he/she was still dealing with Fëanáro and scratching his/her head over his apparent about-face. Good job and congratulations! Author Reply: Thanks for your help with the beta :-) I enjoy messing with my readers, making them think and expect one thing and then hitting with quite another. I do think Arafinwe would have made a wonderful big brother. thanks for reading and reviewing! | |
| Sunny | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/9/2010 |
| Awwwwww... Two very different reactions from two very different Big Brothers. And yes, I definitely prefer Arafinwë's :-) Author Reply: I prefer Arafinwe's reaction as well. I think he would make a great big brother, most unlike Feanor. Thanks for reading and reviewing! | |
| Ellynn | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/9/2010 |
| Awww, beautiful. Yes, I was confused for a while, I admit. But that was your intention, wasn't it? :p Lovely story, as usual. :) Author Reply: You were supposed to be confused :-) I'm glad you enjoyed it. thanks for reading and reviewing! | |