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To See the Light  by Mirach 4 Review(s)
VirtuellaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/18/2010
I thought this was the most impressive entry at this month's Teitho contest. The tone was fabulous - truly haunted. A real work of art.

Author Reply: Many thanks, I'm really glad that you liked it!

curiouswombatReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/17/2010
What an excellent piece - such wonderful use of language - there is a real sense of how the dead must have felt. I am lost in admiration and must go back and read through again.

Author Reply: Thank you very much for your review, I'm honoured!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/17/2010
And so it is that these lost ones are redeemed by the will of one who had no desire to do so, but who must that both he and they might know the peace of what comes next! So wonderful to see them find names and their way opened at the last!

Author Reply: Yes, peace comes next... for them in that very moment, but for him later yet, after many struggles and battles that lie before him...

Thank you very much for your review!

EllynnReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/17/2010
Excellent! I really love how you describe the thoughts of the undead, and their longing for light - perfect!
Great story.

Author Reply: Thank you very much, I'm really glad that you liked it!

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