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| The Colours of the Forest by Avon | 2 Review(s) |
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| DAYNA | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/30/2004 |
| oh.my.gosh. Wow. that was... wow. I love how the older comforts the younger. Leggy sucking his fingers... aww! I think my favorite part is Gillaer's addition to the rhyme: The forest is black; Spider black, Shadow black, Mirkwood black; The forest is black. I think it's an Orc or a Spider. You are AMAZING. Author Reply: *blush* Thanks, Dayna. I'm pleased you liked it. I have to admit that it is pretty close to my heart. Avon | |
| Tinnuial | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/20/2003 |
| That was amazing......the use of the rhyme was heartbreakingly poetic. And it does seem like the sort of rhyme wood elves would sing... Thank you for a lovely story!! :) Author Reply: Thansk for the feedback, Tinnuial. I can't write real poetry but I think this sort of rhyme did work for the story. Avon | |