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| Blessed by Fortune by Ellie | 2 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/9/2010 |
| Yet, in the end, neither side was particularly lucky at all! Author Reply: This is true, but both sides thought they were lucky at some point. I feel sorry for the smith/kinslayer/prisoner. He had a busy few weeks and is about to have a busy however many years until he is released. Thanks for reading and reviewing! | |
| Fiondil | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/8/2010 |
| Loved the reversal of fortune here, Ellie. I feel so sorry for the poor Noldo, thinking that all was going to be well now. I hope that in time his servitude will not prove to onerous and that he will be able to redeem himself in the eyes of his Telerin masters (and maybe the Valar will take pity and rescue him?). The last sentence uttered by the uncle is so ironic. A nice twist. Thanks for sharing. Author Reply: Thanks! Poor guy and just when things were looking so good for him, too! I don't know if the Valar will bother to intercede for him or not. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the comments along the way, too. Thansk for reading and reviewing! | |