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| Unripened Fruit by Gwynnyd | 14 Review(s) |
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| PSW | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/18/2017 |
| This story was so much fun! Just how I imagine Eldarion... :-) Thanks for writing! | |
| Cairistiona | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/16/2010 |
| What a delightful story! You've done a marvelous job of bringing Eldarion to life in this. I especially loved his outrage at being called a "stupid poofer" and Aragorn's befuddlement over just what a "poofer" might be, and all the cheek-chewing Aragorn resorts to to keep from laughing or smiling and embarrassing his son is sweet. The entire tale was a joy to read. Thank you for writing it. | |
| Linda Hoyland | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/14/2010 |
| This was a most enjoyable story. Eldarion is very much his father's son and Aragorn a wise and loving father. The boys and their antics reminded me of the "Just William " books. | |
| UTfrog | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/12/2010 |
| I love all your stories during the 4th age. Eldarion is growing to be the child everyone dreams of parenting. Really good job showing honest emotions - father and son. As always, thank you so much. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/12/2010 |
| I'm hoping that Dirchen will get the idea now that he'd best NOT defer unnecessarily to the prince! Heh! He's had a time of it, I'm certain, trying to keep from besting Eldarion. Borion and the other boys do sound as if they've been a lot more fun to be with. And poor Daisy! Bless the poor beast! And love Aragorn's willingness to let Eldarion find his own place with the younger boys. Excellent! | |
| Radbooks | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/11/2010 |
| Wonderful! I really enjoyed this story; thanks for sharing it with us! | |
| Estelcontar | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/11/2010 |
| This is the most enjoyable story I've read in a long time. Your Eldarion is very believable, and most certainly his father's son. But how could he not be having such a wise, just and caring father guiding him, and giving him good advice. I see the Reunited Kingdom will continue to be wisely ruled for a very long time indeed. The three boys are so alive, and their adventures so satisfying, I caught myself chuckling aloud a couple of times. Thank you for giving me a most pleasurable evening of reading. | |
| RS | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/11/2010 |
| I've never had so much fun reading a story! This was such a delight! So many laughs in between sentences. Unforgettable statements: " Every third person in Pelargir is named Ingold"; "..ravening beasts were not usually named for flowers.". "She lets Dirchen touch them sometimes when they are alone"---Such a typical boy thing to say! --and a typical boy-reaction. Hilarious! This is so reminiscent of the movie "Stand by Me" where friends do what comes natural to them with so much innocence and a little bit of mischief. The quote from the movie comes to mind, " I never had any friends later on like the ones I had when I was twelve"-- **insert** in Pelargir!" I enjoyed the misadventures of Eldarion and his friends! Thanks for such a wonderful story! | |
| BM | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/11/2010 |
| I loved this and giggled all the way through it! Your portrayal of Eldarion was delightful, and I loved all the Ingolds and the other boys. I also loved your Aragorn. You wrote beautifully, describing things so well that I could picture the whole story in my mind. Wonderful! I'm very glad I decided to try it. Thanks for sharing! | |
| curiouswombat | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/11/2010 |
| Not only the story with more Ingolds than any other ever written, but a wonderful tale of childhood and princedom - I really, really enjoyed it. | |