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A Hawk and a Star  by Mirach 3 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/30/2010
A most terrible situation, this. Now--for the rescue! And the artwork is quite seductive!

Author Reply: Thank you, she was supposed to be seductive - on the picture, and in the story, in a way, too. That's her weapon in this form... And the one-Maia rescue team is already coming! ;)

EllieReviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/26/2010
Very dark and frightening chapter! You caught the terror of Ungoliant extremely well. Nicely and chillingly done!

Author Reply: Well, Halloween is nearing, so a creepy chapter is in place (although it is not celebrated where I am...) =) Thank you for the review!

AzureSkyeReviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/25/2010
Sigh....Still more cliffhangers....at least Elwing might have gotten away. I do want to see what Ungoliant says when she finds Eonwe. That will be an interesting conversation. I really have an unhealthy obsession with all your Earendil stories. I think this one is my favorite though. Hope to see another chapter soon! (I really do check everyday, hoping to see and update....unhealthy.)

Author Reply: Thank you very much for the review! It's really great to see that somebody is reading about Ešrendil! I admit this story is quite full of cliffhangers. And
regretfully, there might be a delay in November, because I'm taking part in NaNoWriMo. But I'll try to finish the next chapter before it begins, and I hope that will be a better place to stop, if not exactly ideal...

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