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A Hawk and a Star  by Mirach 4 Review(s)
Carnifindil Telumehtar.Reviewed Chapter: 999999 on 2/7/2015
I really loved the story. Enw is one of my favorite characters. I wish more authors would write about him.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 999999 on 1/11/2011
Good explanations for your choices here. I, too, see a similar spiritual relationship between Manwe and Eonwe.

Author Reply: They just make a great father and son, don't they? =) Thank you for reading the story, and for all reviews!

CairistionaReviewed Chapter: 999999 on 1/11/2011
I know I already told you when I was beta'ing this, but what a wonderful story. I loved the friendship you created between Eonwe and Earendil, and of course, the great sacrifice that Eonwe made in the name of friendship was so incredibly moving.

I'm glad you added the notes explaining what was canon and what wasn't, although you treated canon so respectfully that to me, this entire endeavor *felt* like canon. :)

A job well done! Thanks for letting me help a little with the punctuation. *g*

Author Reply: Thank you very much Cairistiona, not only for this review, but for all your help with the story! I'm glad you enjoyed the tale, and the ending! And I'm also happy that my (more or less) daring assumptions and reading behind the lines felt like canon =)

Erulisse (one L)Reviewed Chapter: 999999 on 1/11/2011
It is a pity to see this story arc come to an end, you do so well with Eonwe. I look forward to your next story arc, though, because I'm sure that your writing will still be excellent and your characters will be interesting and all-too-real. This was a story that was well worth reading, though, and I will be recommending it to other fanfic friends.

- Erulisse (one L)


Author Reply: Thank you very much for reading the story and for all reviews! I'm really glad that you liked it, and thank you for your trust in my future writing!

Best wishes,
Mirach

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