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Shadows of Memory  by Linda Hoyland 8 Review(s)
Adonnen EstennielReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/14/2011
I rather like this. The air of mystery you employ throughout works very well, and keeps a reader's attention. Aragorn's emotions are quite believable, given the present situation. Nicely done.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm pleased you liked the air of mystery.

Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 2 on 2/22/2011
Things get curiouser and curiouser. I feel sorry for Thorongil here. Everything is confusing; Denethor is not as he remembered him.

A good chapter and interesting mystery.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm pleased you are enjoying this.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 2/22/2011
Poor Thorongil is definitely years behind the times at the moment! Faramir has no idea what's going on in his liege's head right now! I hope Arwen appears to help her husband come back to the present rather than dwelling in the past.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.Arwen will indeed play a part in the future.Throrongil is maybe "too" good at concealing what he thinks!

Mysterious JediReviewed Chapter: 2 on 2/22/2011
Wow, Aragorn is very confused indeed. I wonder how long it will take Faramir to figure out what's going on.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.All will soon be revealed,but our hero's problems are far from over yet!

LisaGReviewed Chapter: 2 on 2/21/2011
Hmmmm....curiouser and curiouser! I *think* I know what's going on...at least partly! Aragorn must have some kind of amnesia and has lost all the years between being Thorongil and becoming King. If so, poor Aragorn! He must feel like Alice down the rabbit hole...very disconcerted! But the presence of Denethor is throwing me off...especially Denethor without the scar.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I fear for Aragorn here too. I'm glad I'm managing to keep you guessing!

EstelcontarReviewed Chapter: 2 on 2/20/2011
A very tantalizing chapter two. I enjoyed it even more now that I'm rereading it.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm glad this latest version is working for you.

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 2 on 2/20/2011
Oh dear! Aragorn seems to have lost his memory and thinks Faramir is Denethor. Not good :(

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. No,things are not good for Aragorn at all,alas!

EllynnReviewed Chapter: 2 on 2/20/2011
Wow, this is getting more and more interesting. :) I have some thoughts about it, but I won't say them for now. I'll see later if I was right.
Can't wait for more! :)

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm pleased you are finding this interesting.Do plee tell me if you guess right!

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