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B2MeM 2011: Haradhrim Nights  by Mirach 3 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/18/2011
So, she has been slain for her failure? And her employer is still out there, perhaps making new plans?

CairistionaReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/4/2011
That's so what Thorongil would do, take the time to bury her, out of respect for the life she *didn't* take from him, at cost of her own. I do hope he tracks down who killed her, before they kill him! Love the evocative phrases you use... the entire thing has a wistfulness and a beauty to it, yet overarching it all is a hovering darkness and menace. I'm very much enjoying this, can you tell??

Author Reply: Thank you again! I'm enjoying it too, and I'm curious what tomorrow will bring =) (As I finally got up to date with this chapter...)

EllynnReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/4/2011
What can I say? Another beautiful chapter! I so love your description of the moment of dawn...

Author Reply: Thank you again! (Or did I say that already?) I've never seen dawn in a desert, but I tried to imagine it =)

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