News Resources
Login
Become a member
Help
Search
|
|
| About Us News Resources
Login
Become a member
Help
Search
|
|
|
| tolo dan na galad (`come back to the light`) by Laikwalâssê | 4 Review(s) |
|---|---|
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/12/2011 |
| No, they do not wish to lose both Glorfindel and their father. And whoever is out there could well be lying in wait. Author Reply: No, they won´t and I do not envy them right now. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, Larner. Lai | |
| ellie | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/9/2011 |
| That was a scary occurence with Glorfindel. Glad he and Elrond are okay :-) One thing I do ask of you, in fact beg of you, when writing about Glorfindel: please stop referring to him as "the blond". To me that invokes visions of some cheap bimbo who uses lots of hair dye and that is not how I envision my gallant hero the balrog slayer. I realise that you are trying to find differnt ways of referring to Glorfindel without constantly repeating his name, but constant references to his hair color are distracting from the fascinating tale you are trying to tell. Big hugs and I look forward to the next chapter. Author Reply: Hello Ellie, are Elrond and Glorfindel really ok? I would be glad if you will stay with me to find out. And I´m grateful for your advice and I will heed it, I promise!!You are right it sounds...odd, at least for Glorfindel. Hugs back, Lai | |
| Fiondil | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/9/2011 |
| Not sure how I missed this but I'm glad I saw it. So Glorfi at least is alive, but for how long remains the question. And Elrond detected some evil presence just waiting to pounce on them again. The suspense is building. Will they make it home safely? Looking forward to more. Author Reply: no matter, Fiondil, now you are here and I´m glad. It will definitely not be the last what they encountered of the evil presence. Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it. Lai | |
| GreyLynx | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/9/2011 |
| Oh, Laikwalâssê you keep bringing me all these lovely Elrond and Glorfindel fics. Makes my day everytime ^^ Love your plot. Very angsty/hurt/comforty. Please keep writing! Cheers! :D Author Reply: Hello Grey Lynx. I´m flattened. What can I answer to such a lovely review? Thank you so much. I´m glad and happy that you like my story and be reassured: I will keep writing. It´s too much fun. And angst/hurt/comfort always works best but I will take care of our elves, I promise. Lai | |