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tolo dan na galad (`come back to the light`)  by Laikwalâssê 4 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/2/2011
Grief must be dealt with, and strength must be both husbanded and spent well to see to it that Glorfindel recovers, even though his men did not.

Author Reply: Hi Larner, exactly my opinion. They have to treat carefully now to nudge Glorfindel on a path of true healing. Thank you so much for reading and a much appreciated review. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/16/2011
Elrond's sons should know by now that their father is the consummate healer who would offer up his own life to save another. I hope Glorfindel gets better soon and tells them what happened to them. Obviously there is an evil out there waiting....

Good chapter with lots of pathos. I really liked Erestor here. He's a very capable Elf.

Author Reply: Hi Fiondil, yes I agree with you, that the twins should know, but to be aware of something and to witness it are different things, I think. And Glorfindel would not appreciate such a sacrifice either. And yes, there is evil lurking but not outside.....
Anyway, I appreciate your review very much. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Lai

minuialReviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/15/2011
It's great to see them in Imladris where they will be safer even though the danger remains. I like very much the strong bonds between the twins and between them and Elrond. Looking forward to the next chapters when, hopefully, Glorfindel's situation will improve. Great work.

Author Reply: they are far from save that I can promise. I´ve always imagined the twins as strong bonded and also with their father. I´m glad the description worked. Thank you so much for letting me know and for reading and reviewing. Lai

ellieReviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/14/2011
At least they are back home safe and sound again - even if they did face some pretty tough duties. Elrond is very fortunate to have Erestor to help him with things. Loved seeing the bonds of love between the twins and Elrond. Hope Glorfy gets well soon!

Author Reply: Hi ellie, yes Elrond can be fortunate to have such loyal elves around to help him through this dark time. I´m glad the display of emotions worked. Thank you so much for your review. Lai

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