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Hearts of Men  by Aelaer 2 Review(s)
rsReviewed Chapter: 5 on 7/9/2011
Hey Laer,

Love the opening of the chapter. I can never tire of those scenes. *sigh*

I like your interpretation of a "go getter, take my initiative" Arwen. Atta girl! We don't need an eye candy queen that just "stands by her man"! But..will this action make it easy for our villains with their plans?... or more difficult?

How ironic that Rangil is unknowingly helping to rid of a person he has long admired and respects. I've a feeling this may be a factor later in the story...or not.

And Bregon...he loves his wine. Will that be his downfall??....My mind is working here.

This is so good!

EllynnReviewed Chapter: 5 on 7/8/2011
'A land of peasants with a minor lord here and there, most unfit to weald a sword'

Err... "wield"? *unsure*

I think Arwen's plan is really good. But also, knowing what we know and she doesn't, the trip might prove dangerous for her, right? *scared*

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