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Doubts  by Laikwalâssê 3 Review(s)
IlyaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/19/2013
Aww, this was so emotional! I like that the twins chose alike, in the end. Elrohir worries too much, with all his second guessing! Brilliant one-shot!

Author Reply: thank you so much! Their choice has always intrigued me and somehow I can sypathize with Elrohir. My intention was to make it emotional and it worked. Thank you for letting me know. Lai

eliza61Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/1/2011
Lovely, lovely story Laikwalasse. I always thought that it would be a very hard choice. I would have been MORE surprised if both of the twins didn't have doubts. You've done a great job displaying Elrohirs emotions.

Isn't starting a new life hard for anyone?

Author Reply: Hi eliza61, you are so right, but in their case it seems much worse to me. Elladasn has surely his own doubts but he´s not the one to speak his heart. I´m so glad you liked my little story. Thank you so much for letting me know. Lai

ellieReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/31/2011
nice introspection full of all of the doubt and uncertainty that certainly plagued the twins. well done!

Author Reply: thank you, Ellie. I´ve ever tried to imagine how difficult it must have been for the twins to make their choice. I can pretty well sypathize with Elrohir´s doubts. Thank you for reading and reviewing. Lai

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