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Doubts  by Laikwalss 3 Review(s)
IlyaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/19/2013
Aww, this was so emotional! I like that the twins chose alike, in the end. Elrohir worries too much, with all his second guessing! Brilliant one-shot!

Author Reply: thank you so much! Their choice has always intrigued me and somehow I can sypathize with Elrohir. My intention was to make it emotional and it worked. Thank you for letting me know. Lai

eliza61Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/1/2011
Lovely, lovely story Laikwalasse. I always thought that it would be a very hard choice. I would have been MORE surprised if both of the twins didn't have doubts. You've done a great job displaying Elrohirs emotions.

Isn't starting a new life hard for anyone?

Author Reply: Hi eliza61, you are so right, but in their case it seems much worse to me. Elladasn has surely his own doubts but hes not the one to speak his heart. Im so glad you liked my little story. Thank you so much for letting me know. Lai

ellieReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/31/2011
nice introspection full of all of the doubt and uncertainty that certainly plagued the twins. well done!

Author Reply: thank you, Ellie. Ive ever tried to imagine how difficult it must have been for the twins to make their choice. I can pretty well sypathize with Elrohirs doubts. Thank you for reading and reviewing. Lai

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