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Creation Song of Ilúvatar  by Fadesintothewest 3 Review(s)
NilmandraReviewed Chapter: 22 on 8/18/2003
You dare to end there? Ah...........I want to see Legolas' reaction to the song! I want to see the twins talk to Glorfindel the mighty Golden One, the magnificent, the bold, he of unsurpassing beauty....

*yanks keyboard back from Glorfindel*

Hurry up and get your work done!

Fan81981Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 8/18/2003
I will forgive your tardiness in updating if you upload the new chapter quickly - right about now would be good. I want to see what the Golden One has planned for the Twins.

I must say that your elves are quite unique. I mean this is a very good way. I have read about elves being noble, I have read them when they are being paternal, loving etc - but I have rarely seen them this sensual. You bring about their humour in a particularly adult way. It is nice to see the elves displaying their wit and humour without having to resort to pranks.

See they CAN be grownup.

UPDATE SOON - please.

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 22 on 8/18/2003
Glorfindel sure knows how to take revenge. Legolas should watch what he says next time, or at least look around first and make sure the Golden One isn't listening. And I would be pleased to see anything Glorfindel wants to show me!

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