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| Homecomings by Jay of Lasgalen | 3 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/9/2011 |
| They are Elrond's children after all! Excellent! | |
| Cairistiona | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/13/2011 |
| Very nice! There's a breathless quality to the pace of his drabble, one that ends leaving you feeling your own jaw jut with determination just as Elrond's must have. (And like so many drabbles do, leave me wanting to see what happened before and what happens next!) Author Reply: Thank you! I'm really glad the sense of urgency came across - it's so difficult to do in a drabble. I'll have to see if I can fit a sequel around the next prompt! | |
| ellie | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/13/2011 |
| Poor Elrohir! At least Elladan was able to get ot him and save him. You really need to write a longer story about the twins again. Author Reply: Well, I couldn't leave him there, could I? :>) 'You really need to write a longer story about the twins again.' I know. I want to, but the muses seem to have disappeared! At the moment all I can manage are drabbles. | |