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The Colour of Love  by Linda Hoyland 3 Review(s)
EstelcontarReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/18/2011
Linda, I've told you once but it bears repeating. I found this a most charming gap filler. I think you did a great job of capturing how a younger child feels when another arrives to share the parent's time and affection.

The last paragraph is absolutely spot on and delightful. I would have voted for it, if unfortunately I had not this time missed Teitho's deadline most completely.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm pleased you enjoyed this story.I'm so pleased this felt real for you and thank you for telling me too that you would have voted for it.

EllynnReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/17/2011
Awww, very lovely, Linda. I am sure Eldarion will speak similarly to his children one day. :)

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm pleased you enjoyed this story.Eldarion will have a great example to think of when he talks to his children.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/16/2011
Your sister is so very little that she cannot tell us what she needs, so that is why she needs so much attention

What a wonderful explanation. I enjoyed this father-and-son scene very much.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm pleased you enjoyed this story.

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