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A Letter to AmariŽ  by Mirach 2 Review(s)
ellieReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/8/2011
Beautiful! You capture his pain and fear and love so very well. We can only hope she takes him back.

Author Reply: Thank you very much! I believe she will!

TiggerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/8/2011
Oh my!!

I'm sitting here w/a lump in my throat and tears in my eyes. Well done indeed Mirach.

One thing...

the headiness of vicory and bitterness of defeat...

There's a missing "t". You know though, I've done that too in the past. Not here, but at other places. You're so excited to post your story and share it w/others that the littlest thing slips by. So don't feel too bad about that. I've done it and I'm betting others around here have too. :o)

Such a lovely heartfelt story. This will be going into my Favourites.

Thanks for sharing that w/us. :o)

Author Reply: Thank you for the review and catching the typo! I know this very good from my thesis - you can read your text a million times, but stil some mistake slips by, because you know what *should* be written there, and read it that way =)

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