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Thunderstorm  by Lily Dragonquill 3 Review(s)
Hobbit Lass21Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/29/2005
Mmm! Poor Frodo baby! I love how you write Primula, she's become one of my favorite characters...I LOVE Frodo/Primula-ness! Makes me warm and fuzzy inside.....

Author Reply: I love to write Primula and Frodo together and I could cry every time I realise that she has only been with him for such a short time. I'm happy that you like *my* Primula, because she is very dear to me too.

xsilicaxReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/2/2004
Aww, scary and sweet.
I can remember being quite young and my mother only going next door to borrow something, but feeling very guilty and concerned about leaving me and my brother behind in bed. I thought you did a wonderful job portraying this with Primula.

Cathy,
xx

Author Reply: Thanks a lot for that lovely review!

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/15/2003
Touchingly sweet story. I reminds me of leaving my own son at home alone and having a rainstorm blow up after a long dry spell. It turned out the roof leaked and water poured into the room where he was watching TV. Not so scary as your story, but I was proud of him for putting towels out to mop up the water. He at least had the dog to keep him company. Sorry, I am rambling a little, but I think it's because you did a nice job of making Frodo real here.

Author Reply: Thank you very much for this.
I was a bit scared at the beginning, fearing it would be 'too much' to happen, just during a 'little' thunderstorm. It was a story I wrote without having any idea of what it was leading me.

I'm glad you liked it... and I hope your son never has an experience like this to go through.

By the way... I too had the dog, when I was younger, to keep me company.

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