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Warriors Proud  by Ellie 5 Review(s)
TariReviewed Chapter: 17 on 2/27/2015
Wow! How awesome to meet Lord Ulmo in person and receive his blessings. Haldir should be on cloud nine so to speak.

Author Reply: Given the circumstances, I think Haldir was just plain relieved to have some good news at last.

I apologize for the delay in my review replies. I was hit far harder than expected by Fiondil's passing and then I fell and broke my shoulder and injured my wrist a few days ago. Sometimes life sucks and then gets complicated. ACK! Your reviews have been a most welcome bright spot in this in all of this.

Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing! I hope you continue to enjoy the story!

Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 17 on 10/14/2012
Beautifully, and heart-breakingly, written. How terrible for all those concerned, but mostly for Haldir. I do so hope Handir will recover. That should help relieve some of his father's sorrow.

And Lord Ulmo. Great moment. Though I wish the Belain could teach ME how to skip a stone 27 times!

Author Reply: It had to be difficult for all involved and and especially for Haldir. My stone skipping record is 8 times I think. It would be cool to see Ulmo skipping stones.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

curiouswombatReviewed Chapter: 17 on 10/11/2012
What a beautifully written meeting with Ulmo - and what reassurance for Haldir that things are as they should be, and also that they will be safely guided to Doriath.

Author Reply: Thank you very much :-) I'm glad you like Ulmo! They do have guidance to Doriath and that will be a big help!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 17 on 10/11/2012
Oh, I LOVE the one who comes to straighten Haldir out! And love the skipping stones, and the fish treats! Who else would know where to find truly flat stones perfect for skipping and would carry fish treats (and possibly Elf treats as well!) on his person! The description is perfect!

Excellent!

Author Reply: Of course Ulmo would carry fish treats. I do have to wdoner what kind of elf treats he would have had though. LOL! I'm pleased you like my Ulmo :-)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!


eilujReviewed Chapter: 17 on 10/10/2012
Not so much fun at the beginning, but much fun at the end! I loooved your Ulmo (and his skill at stone-skipping).

And things are looking up. And they're going to Doriath and safety -- and it looks as if I don't have to worry whether they get there (thank you for that). And thank you also that none of the wives have had miscarriages and none of the family's kids have been lost.

Now I just have to figure out what Doom Adar has planned for Haldir....

Author Reply: Sorry for the delay in replying...

The beginning was not much fun at all for anyone. I'm so glad you liked Ulmo. Things are looking up in a way. At least there are survivors and they are on on their way to Doriath now.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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