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Dreamflower's Mathoms III  by Dreamflower 3 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/15/2013
Oh, what it has made him do! Poor Deagol, and poor Smeagol as well. Already a slave to the lies told by that soul-trap!

Author Reply: It did not take long for Smeagol to fall to the Ring. He was already the sort of creature who thought only of his own desires--and it barely took an instant for the Ring to take over.

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/23/2013
Chilling indeed!

But perfectly written, especially the usage of gender (or the lack of it)!

Déagol didn't look like himself anymore. It wasn't a real person now. It was just cold flesh.

VirtuellaReviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/21/2013
Sad and chilling - an excellent vignette!

Author Reply: Thank you! It was very chilling and difficult to write!

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