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|Dreamflower's Mathoms III by Dreamflower||3 Review(s)|
|Larner||Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/15/2013|
|Oh, what it has made him do! Poor Deagol, and poor Smeagol as well. Already a slave to the lies told by that soul-trap!|
Author Reply: It did not take long for Smeagol to fall to the Ring. He was already the sort of creature who thought only of his own desires--and it barely took an instant for the Ring to take over.
|Andrea||Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/23/2013|
But perfectly written, especially the usage of gender (or the lack of it)!
Déagol didn't look like himself anymore. It wasn't a real person now. It was just cold flesh.
|Virtuella||Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/21/2013|
|Sad and chilling - an excellent vignette!|
Author Reply: Thank you! It was very chilling and difficult to write!