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Sea Flower  by Soledad 3 Review(s)
Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 5 on 7/2/2014
What an exciting chapter! Loved the description of the Sea Conqueror and its quasi-legendary reputation. The storm's effects were well written, and Ivriniel's summoning of Osse a great surprise.

I wonder what is ahead for the Sea Flower now that she is come to Umbar. Update soon!

Author Reply: Your wish is my command - Chapter 6 has just gone online. :)

I'm glad you still like the story. Thanks for taking the time to review. It is much appreciated.

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/25/2014
I loved this chapter and Ivriniel's strength and courage. I especially enjoyed the image of the flying ship, very imaginative. I was gripped by the story.

Author Reply: Thank you, Linda. I must admit that when I read that obscure reference about Númenórean flying ships, I simply couldn't resist. I had to include it into the story. :)

Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/25/2014
Well, well, well, so Ivriniel is off to her adventure... and quite an adventure it is! Excellent chapter after a lengthy wait, but it was worth it.

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