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Confusion  by Laikwalss 18 Review(s)
Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 5 on 11/9/2012
Whooo hoo! So sometimes visions can be used for good.

Great tale. Fun (sometimes my heart was in my throat) to read. Nice ending.

Author Reply: yes, not always but sometimes. I had to think for a nice ending for poor Elrohir. Im glad you liked it. Thanks. Lai

Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/9/2012
We authors can be downright nasty to the characters we write!

You are fiendishly terrible.

But a great beginning..... My heart broke.

Author Reply: yes, we can be nasty but thats the fun in it, isnt it? Thank you so much and a breaking heart was my intention. LOL! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, Agape. Lai

ladyevenstar Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 11/8/2012
my heart just stopped and restarted again!!! excellent story! hannon le

Author Reply: then I did something right! The story was so much fun to write. Im so glad it worked. Thank you so much for letting me know and a much appreciated review. Lai

demeter dReviewed Chapter: 5 on 11/8/2012
So in the time between, Elrohir was subconsciously "waiting for the other shoe to drop", as the idiom goes! And when the moment struck, he was ready, and took control of the fate-filled vision. Wow. Perhaps their father has also forgotten about the troubling "dream", also. Either way, I am sure he will be very interested in how that battle ended. Very well done!

Author Reply: I doubt that Elrond has forgotten about the vision, but he will be all the more pleased how the vision served to rescue one of his sons. Im so glad you liked my story. I really appreciate your review. Thanks. Lai

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 5 on 11/8/2012
That was a very suspenseful story! What a bond there is between these two. I love happy endings. :)

Author Reply: thank you, shirebound. The bond between these two has always fascinated me. Im glad you liked the happy ending and the story. Thank you so much for the review. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 5 on 11/8/2012
No, sometimes vision aren't all bad and this one helped save his brother. This was a lot of fun, Lai. Thanks for sharing.

Author Reply: it was also fun to write. Im glad you liked the little confusing trip. Thank you so much for letting me know. Lai

ladyevenstarReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/7/2012
Yay Elladan is officially alive... for now. Can't wait to see the next plot twist in this :)

Author Reply: yes, Elladan is alive but will Elrohir have the chance to keep it that way? Tomorrow you will know. Thank you so much for reviewing. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/7/2012
Well, at least he's not fainting all over the place anymore. *grin* Will be interested in seeing where this leads.

Typo alert: 'size' should be 'seize' in the last sentence.

Author Reply: yes, a bit relaxation for our poor twin, but will he make good use of the information? The answer tomorrow. Thank you for pointing out the typo. I have already fixed it! Sorry. As always thanks for a most appreciated review, Fiondil. Lai

elizaReviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/6/2012
OMG!! A evil cliffie and a mystery (aaah, I am so not good with mysteries, I love them but I suck at solving them). what an intense chapter, I feel so utterly bad for Elrohir, he must feel like he's in the middle of some twisted nightmare.
Can't wait to see what's next.

This is a great read Lai, thank you.

Author Reply: thank you so much, eliza. Im so glad the story works so well. I wasnt so sure about that. Yes, poor Elrohir, its really time for him to solve the riddle and to get some relaxation.Thank you for reviewing. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/6/2012
Hmm... a dream or a vision... that makes sense and if he Elrohir was so caught up in it he might not be able to tell dream from reality. Poor ellon. Hope they can help him discover the truth.

Author Reply: yes, poor Elrohir but who can help him better then his father? - he has some experience with visions himself. Lets see how they can help him tomorrow with the next chapter. Thank you so much for reviewing, Findil. Lai

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