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Not a day like others  by Laikwalâssê 6 Review(s)
gginscReviewed Chapter: 4 on 12/19/2013
An excellent story. I truly enjoyed reading it even though the thought of Imladris being invaded by Orcs is horrifying.

ellieReviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/5/2013
A good ending but a troubling one as well...

Author Reply: indeed, and Elrond will have a lot to think about and I´m already thinking hard about a sequel. LOL. Thank you so much for revieweing, Ellie. Lai

eliza61Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/18/2013
What a great tale Laikwalasse, a mystery and suspense! loved it. I so feel for Elladan though, we are a bit of kindred spirits. I too have the patience of a knat, lol. there is nothing more frustrating than waiting on someone you know you cannot not force to bend to your will. ***sighs***

the ending was great, very nice to sneak a peak into what I always thought was a very deep friendship underlying service.

enjoyed it immensely.

Author Reply: thank you so much for your lovely words and I can wholehardedly agree with you. I´m a bit like Elladan too, but Glorfndel is Glorfindel and Elladan will have to be content with the information he is getting. Even if the great friendship of Glorfindel and Elrond is known, I also love to remember that Glorfindel is dong a service to the other Elf-lord and if this service is done with love and dedication then it is the best you can get. Again thank you for reviewing. I really appreciate it. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/18/2013
Ah, a satisfying ending even though we never learn who or what attacked Elrond and how his defenses were breached. Loved Glorfindel in this. He can be so intimidating when he wants to be, especially toward the twins. Elrond is very fortunate to have him as a friend and protector. Thanks, Lai!

Author Reply: you are welcome, Fiondil. Yes the end was satisfying, but I suspect Elrond will have a lot to think about. And you are right, Glorfindel is simply the best. Who was behind the attack....mmmmhm...much room for a sequel? THank you so much for reviewing. I really appreciate it. Lai

Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/18/2013
Wow. That was certainly a daunting tale. It reminded me of Gondolin. Glad that ending was different.

But it is unsettling.

Well done.

Author Reply: unsettling indeed and Elrond will surely need some time to come to terms with it and investigate what happened. I´m glad you liked the story even if it was unsettling. Many thanks for reviewing. Lai

IlyaReviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/17/2013
Brilliant way to end it! I'm glad Elrond and Glorfindel are recovering. Here's hoping nothing like this ever happens again- it was a bit too close! Great story though.

Author Reply: I´m so glad you liked the ending. Elrond is recovering but this time it has affected him and surely he is also hoping for no repetition. Thank yo so much for reading and reviewing. Lai

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